Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today's world. Others feel that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them.
• In what ways are computers a hindrance?
• What is your opinion?
Technology has completely changed the equation of living nowadays. Many people are aware about the usage of computers and some might be still under the waters of not fully utilizing its capabilities in daily life. But there have always been supporters and criticizers of everything. In this paragraph a full discussion is being elaborated about whether computers are a hinderance to the normal life or an indispensible tool without whom existence in today's world is not possible.
The day Charles Babbage, the father of Modern computers invented the first analytical engine. No one truly believed that this will be the first step towards a new phase of technology that will completely modernise the human species. Today, there is not even a single thing that runs without a computer chip or application in it. In different sectors like telecommunication, hygiene, food, education, medical facilities, internet and much more these fields are running on computer technology. Everyone today is completely dependent on this electronic device and follows it blindly. Bigger businesses, corporations and any kind of work whether personal or professional is being performed on computers and it has completely revolutionized everything around the globe.
But, if this has its own benefits there are many problems associated with this piece of brilliance. Firstly, children between the age of 9-16 are completely addicted towards this device because of the craze of online gaming and the popularity of social media. None of these young ones believe in the theory of human face-to-face communication rather they want to talk online and make friends to just increase their persona among the virtual community. Secondly, lack of skill development among today's youth even though they are learning much more informative things from the internet by using computers and laptops but still they are not able to master everything because of less physical exposure. Thirdly, every human being in today's time has completely neglected his physical health because of the current working scenario taken over by information and technology sector.
In my opinion, computers has completely revolutionised all the things around for the betterment and has completely improved the current equation of the world. The advancement in technology is no doubt a great achievement but this device has become a greater hurdle in a common man's personal life. All his emotions, connections, physicality and ideas are being totally controlled by computers and the relevant technology which is not a great thing as this will make a human completely alienated towards everything.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, kind of, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2233.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40677966102 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96348849653 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4468917664 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.055555556 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9444444444 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201745473653 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604633786835 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487349766188 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12648593827 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368138927194 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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