The majority of the workforce is replacing humans with artificially intelligent robots. In my opinion, it is possible that unskilled jobs such as informing and selling will be replaced by robots but jobs that require specialized skills will remain to people. This essay will discuss why most of the jobs will be taken over by artificially intelligent robots over the following years.
In the future, professions that do not require the abilities of humans will be performed by machines. Because artificial intelligence could save the most important parts of humankind such as time and money. In the bank, for instance, some tellers replaced by ATM. It helps people to deposit or transfer money simpler. Moreover, it saves time, people do not need to stand in line with the bank and allows them to serve 24/7 throughout until its expired date. For these reasons, most of the jobs could be replaced by robots with artificial intelligence in the following periods.
Conversely, there are some jobs that cannot be substituted by robots. The jobs that demand abilities that only humans have could not be replaced by machines. These jobs include psychology, education, and medicine, etc. Especially doctors would not be substituted by Robotics. According to this, Machines will never replace these kinds of jobs that need “human touch” for thousands of years.
In conclusion, a significant number of people would be taken over by robots in their work fields. Labor that not require specific skills that only people have will definitely be done by robots, other than that, people will always need in the workforce with their educated abilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20599250936 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72735820812 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516853932584 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6542668246 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.875 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342269974404 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115361596993 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685839509816 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217033616689 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050433748326 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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