Some people believe the government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more
and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is often argued that, constructions of innovative railway lines or approach road are the solution to reduce the traffic problem. While others encouraging to expand the size of road is the best way to tackle this issue. However, both answers have had their own pro's and con's, I believe that, the first option is the best of choice for the government to do.
Firstly, building subway lines and over bridge would have nourished result of motor vehicle congestion. Long line bus, garage vehicles can use this fascilitie's instead of block other local services. In addition, metro trains in big cities could have decreasing peoples wastage of time in traffic block and which will be the easier way to reach the destination as well.
With regards to the widening of roads have some detrimental effect on to the nature and pedestrians. Although,it would have some kind of reduction in traffic overload, which would leads to accidents and extra usage of fuels in order to make use of one way lines. For instance, people's needs to use such lines to reach the near by destinations because of wider roads which cannot allow to pass in between as often. Furthermore, for the enlargement of roads would affect the echo system such as, government insisted to cut the trees and near by things of roads for widening.
In conclusion, the road traffic authority expends money for advanced train and other lines for the vehicle congested problems to manage. so that it would reduce the issue with less negativity to the nature in contrast to expanding of road to three or more lines.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...solution to reduce the traffic problem. While others encouraging to expand the size o...
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Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'expanding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: expanding
...affic problem. While others encouraging to expand the size of road is the best way to tac...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cles can use this fascilities instead of block other local services. In addition,...
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Line 6, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... to the nature and pedestrians. Although,it would have some kind of reduction in tr...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...uction in traffic overload, which would leads to accidents and extra usage of fuels i...
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Line 6, column 323, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...es needs to use such lines to reach the near by destinations because of wider roads whi...
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Line 6, column 386, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'passing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: passing
...cause of wider roads which cannot allow to pass in between as often. Furthermore, for t...
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Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...overnment insisted to cut the trees and near by things of roads for widening. In c...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...e vehicle congested problems to manage. so that it would reduce the issue with les...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86617100372 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5247520543 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579925650558 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2915015843 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.083333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264512543729 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903029663293 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403449297288 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154575530724 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213723166996 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.