Some people believe that it is good to share much informagion as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is considered by some that providing a great number of information is beneficial in scientific studies, business and education sector. Others however, believed that there are some data and information that should be best kept secret. Although, I agree that sharing useful information is vital to achieve success in different industries, I believe that there are confidential datas that should not be exposed to the public.
Some people think that sharing more information about latest research findings or the latest trend in business and in the a academe is advantageous for the people. In research for instance, a medical breakthrough in kidney transplant will give people hope for the people who are on the long list waiting for possible donors. This kind of good news has to be spread all over the world. Moreover, people who succeed in running their businessess may also share their strategies, so that other enterprenuers will be able to learn how to strategize in promoting their own product and in building their own empire. Furthermore, in regards to the academic world, professors should post information that willl help their students in learning their subjects in an enjoyable and faster way.
On the other hand other people think that there are some information that are too vital to be publized. Firstly, people who has a rare medical co dition that is not detrimentsl to other humans should not be publicly shared. For instance, babies who are born with excess extremities must be proctected from those who don't understand the condition fully. Secondly, family history with dark past should be left unearthen. By doing this, the future generation will be able to live peacefully and as authentic as they make their own names in the society.
In conclusion, although therr are some informations that is necessary to be heard by the public there are also some that should be kept private to protect both the individual and the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
...ple think that sharing more information about latest research findings or the latest trend i...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
... or the latest trend in business and in the a academe is advantageous for the people....
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the latest trend in business and in the a academe is advantageous for the people....
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Line 3, column 623, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...building their own empire. Furthermore, in regards to the academic world, professors should p...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble and faster way. On the other hand other people think that there are some i...
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Line 5, column 318, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ities must be proctected from those who dont understand the condition fully. Secondl...
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t is necessary to be heard by the public there are also some that should be kept ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07120743034 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74207294696 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544891640867 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0506043746 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320594491087 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113565526957 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774148909119 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191769036126 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425025016475 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.