Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There has been a collossal upsurge in discussing wheter or not share as much information as possible in scientific reseaech business and the academic world. Sharing or not are have their own pros and cons. Both side of this debate will be aalyzed in this essay before my reasoned conclusion is reached.
On the one hand, it is obvious that sharing is the good behavior and it can create a good harmony in all relationship. Sharing not only expresses your sympathy and empathy with the others but also help us develop together. Although scientific research, business and the academic world is the valuable material of one nation or individual, it is obvious that we can share it for the other nations to use. Sharing these things not just help the others escape the jeopardise situation and maybe we can find some flaw in our collected information. Morevover, if we don't share the information with each others, it hardly to maintain the relationship and the world become more selfish and jealous. We always be taught to be integrate with others and that is the good morale to share the information in scientific research, business and the academic world. If everyone know the way how to share, the world will fulfill with happiness and good things.
On the other hands, I believe that we just share enough information to the others and retain the information which is too important and valuable. If the information relate to the private or for internal using only, it must be keep for ourselves. Leaking the national information relate to scientific research, business and the academic world can make the country fall in danger. For instance, if the government in US share all information relate to the material and elements of scientific research, business and the academic world to the others, it can put this nations in jeopardise by their rival and no longer to hosted the most powerful nation in the world. Finally, sharing is not bad but we need to know which should or not.
In conclusion, everything associates with two sides: one affirmative and the other negative points. It all comes down that we need to share the informationin scientific research, business and the academic world to the people surrounding us in order to create great relationship and secure the private information. I personally believe that share too much information is not a good thing.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... the academic world. Sharing or not are have their own pros and cons. Both side of t...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... things not just help the others escape the jeopardise situation and maybe we can find some fl...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...collected information. Morevover, if we dont share the information with each others,...
^^^^
Line 3, column 696, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
...rld become more selfish and jealous. We always be taught to be integrate with others and ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93017456359 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75156268231 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443890274314 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5845136994 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.833333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2777777778 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482144469106 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159823456455 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112015732844 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299345082888 0.151304729494 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307576739821 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... the academic world. Sharing or not are have their own pros and cons. Both side of t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... things not just help the others escape the jeopardise situation and maybe we can find some fl...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...collected information. Morevover, if we dont share the information with each others,...
^^^^
Line 3, column 696, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
...rld become more selfish and jealous. We always be taught to be integrate with others and ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93017456359 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75156268231 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443890274314 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5845136994 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.833333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2777777778 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482144469106 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159823456455 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112015732844 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299345082888 0.151304729494 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307576739821 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.