Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, there is a widespread belief that sharing information among the people who work in the domain of the business, academic and science is essential, since the idea of distributing wide range of information is likely assist them to prevent some issues, which in turn, may contribute individuals' standard of living. However, it needs to take into account, not all information ought to be shared because it is highly likely that it may implicate some downsides that will lead to some unavoidable problems. The arguments in support of sharing information are multifaceted, yet there are also factors that it is worth to keep them under secret. In this essay, I will touch upon each of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 578.0 1615.20841683 36% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 116.0 315.596192385 37% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98275862069 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28181803491 4.20363070211 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81615646185 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 176.041082164 44% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672413793103 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 186.3 506.74238477 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.1602238803 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.5 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215117230411 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108794878113 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691575306608 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215117230411 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.