some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices
to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
People in the past were devoid of any real choices, thus they happened to live their life without any struggle, as choosing a dress was never really stressful in their time. On the other hand, some say that people living in present day has a plethora of options to choose in any aspect of their life. I agree to this statement entirely and the following paragraph intends to elaborate the ideas supporting this statement.
In olden times, world was completely isolated, many countries lacked basic infrastructure and lived in a world with poor transportation and communication. This resulted in fewer opportunities for growth and development, hence affecting the wholesome growth of the people. For instance, in countries with poor transportation facilities, people’s only choice is to visit the hospital in their proximity, this hinders the consumers ability to choose the commodity they need.
Nowadays, people has the wonderful opportunity to browse broad categories and choose products that suits their need. Hence, they have the freedom to choose the diet, dress, education, healthcare, transportation, entertinement and even in bride based on their preference. This is such as blessing in terms of youngsters point of view, as aspirring individual can make use of such profound choices in their favour and achieve bigger dreams.
In conclusion,todays contemporary world has advanced technology which makes communication through social media and transportation easier and faster. With the advancement in smart phone people are increasingly exposed to wide range of possibilities and their capacity to purchase or choose any commodity increased.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 420, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'consumers'' or 'consumer's'?
Suggestion: consumers'; consumer's
...al in their proximity, this hinders the consumers ability to choose the commodity they ne...
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Line 8, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , todays
... achieve bigger dreams. In conclusion,todays contemporary world has advanced technol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, really, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55511811024 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16320146555 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622047244094 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9701035999 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 128.272727273 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155466339101 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059722162513 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478793023763 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873610674058 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335705497391 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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