Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that the standard of living is improved creating countless opportunities for people to make a decision as they want. I totally agree with this issue and in this essay, I will give some reasons to support my idea.
On the one hand, the development of the economy leads to people expend their choices in daily life. In other words, people are getting wealthier due to the growth of the economy making them widen their rights and opportunity in options such as which kind of food they want to eat or what types of clothes they will buy. When people have enough conditions to meet their demands, they will have a higher priority in choosing the best thing for them. For example, in Vietnam, a student who has lived in a rich family will have more options studying at a university in Vietnam or go to abroad to pursue a bachelor's degree.
On the other hand, modern life and new thinking lead to people having too many choices in their life. In the past parents always believe that their children must go to university after finishing their courses in high school because they think this is the best way to help children have a better life in the future. However, nowadays when people have modern thinking, students could go to work straightforward after high school or take part in a training course instead of studying at university, and this choice might help them to acquire experience and enhance their skills which is one of the vital requirements to find a good job with high salary.
In conclusion, the growth of the economy and change in people's attitudes are great chances to create more opportunities for people in choosing.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66896551724 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48174308733 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.2219067422 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.4 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18433856923 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768287185986 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445436248882 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100968045667 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295376707349 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66896551724 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48174308733 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.2219067422 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.4 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18433856923 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768287185986 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445436248882 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100968045667 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295376707349 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.