Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
it is often argued that the modern people enjoy a piece of choices whatsoever shopping or buying food, we many take many goods based on our hoping. I certainly agree with this statement and this essay will express my views.
To begin with, though it is undeniable that there may be a reducing situation in some occupations, like the traditional chef, since the generation of electronic chef robots, which can cook the delicious dishes easily with no accident and mistake according to their database. The above renovation is dangerous to instead the amount of occupations, which causes a reduce as soon as we choose our interested occupation. I reckon that we can still increase our choices entirely as long as we make a change for the future trend, such as creating a new post for citizens. Moreover, as the amount of choice is increasing spectacularly on various species, we own a number of choices now.
On the other hand, the reason is that the mature technology affords a piece of information for us. For instance, there are several shopping ways in this moment, people is able to browse the website of online shop and buy a dream good at home as well as continue the classical way, get the real cargo on the street. So, as far as shopping, we can choose the best method for ourselves. In addition to shopping, the ways of communication are also increasing. A personal example would be the fact that we enjoy several opportunities to make a conversation with friends or family, not only have a talk on telephone anytime but also meet our close relatives on face-time application everywhere. Thus, the modern technology expands the possibilities of various messages receiving as well as improves the poor choices in the past.
In conclusion, because of the developing technology strengthens the likelihood of touching more information for everyone, I strongly believe that we get uncountable choices now.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is often argued that the modern people ...
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Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun take seems to be countable; consider using: 'many takes'.
Suggestion: many takes
... whatsoever shopping or buying food, we many take many goods based on our hoping. I certa...
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Line 2, column 360, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...the amount of occupations, which causes a reduce as soon as we choose our interested occ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e that we get uncountable choices now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, moreover, so, still, then, thus, well, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94720496894 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88858108736 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9188245076 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.538461538 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3076923077 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164561493789 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536890559635 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518780391506 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107381802676 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656063937564 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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