The development of technology and improvement of production have contributed to boost of supplies in life. While some people argue that there are too many choices being offered in modern life, I believe that it is still not enough.
Good examples can be found in life to substantiate the opinion about too many choices, including food, clothes, ways of entertainment etc. It is true that we could get easy access to cuisines from all over the world. clothes are available in shops every day and online every minute as long as you want to buy. In addition, there are thousands of different programmes on tv for entertainment to kill time. These situation may leads to a waste of sources to some extent. I assume that is the reason why people think we have too many choices.
However, in my opinion, the choices are still not enough since everyone has his or her own standard, especially in the ways of life we want to live. Firstly, majority of employees have to wear formal clothes in work life and women have to put on particular design to earn a life in some occasions. They are not offered with engough choices. Secondly, if someone would like to choose a life which is different from others, he or she will have to undertake the huge pressure from people around. The choices offered to this type of people are still in short supply nowadays.
To conclude, I have to admit that there are numerous choices for people on the material level, however, I tend to insist that the choices for personal development are not engough at all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, in addition, in short, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67279411765 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53903085055 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569852941176 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0260756844 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7857142857 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239592844099 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816149130721 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732414836158 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139376157325 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595108257933 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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