It is no denying fact that education more crucial for human beings lives in today time. However, few individuals believe the movies ought to merely for entertainment as well as in contrary side they ought to also have educational values. I will explain both views with my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
Commencing with the advocates favouring movies, why it is necessary for entertainment. First and foremost, although entertainment movies are more significant for human lives. It has a plethora of worth, which are chosen by a human. Since, they are want to watch in their leisure time. However, they are watch movies on electronic equipment as television and mobile phone. It is fact despite they can reduce work stress and feel of relaxing in day to day time. Ergo, we can not ignore this embodiment period.
On another side, the proponents of education values have viewpoints. However, movies not only help people to reduce stress, but also forge concentration power among the human. While, they should be release education shows in today time, since nowadays the entertainment movie despite the influence on infants. If they will watch the educational story and they can learn about the cultural history. This, the more education, the more opportunities.
To conclude, while the educational movies not only important for children life but also instead of they are in development rise surrounding knowledge in day to day time. In my opinion that so we can not ignore the trend of education has an excessive advantage in children life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, while, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11811023622 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81637814648 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7438960263 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4705882353 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132804477297 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432269717302 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463108521974 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925714484674 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543662588982 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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