In past years, E-learning has becoming so famous a way of learning for children because of the pandemic (Corona Virus). Some people think that schools are no longer of the same importance as it used to be because children can get access to a great deal of information on the internet to study at home by themselves. I solely believe that schools, rather then E-learning, are imperative in the education system.
Meanwhile, an basic advantage of learning at schools is that children can get guidance from teachers. Teachers can take knowledge from the books and instill it into the children, as well as also help them in getting understand there home work. Also, teachers will personally supervise on children's scores and help them improve school performance.
One of the main factor is that children will have social interaction at school rather than at home. Children can be more extrovert and they can be easy socialize as they make friends and interact with schoolmates. In fact, they can learn teamwork skills at school, which is greatly can be used in successful and future life.
Last but not the least, information which is provided on the internet can be wrong so they need teachers who can crosscheck with the information and help the children's. However, they also can get to be distracted with the games and social media apps which is so much in hype in this modern era.
To cap it all, it is seen than school learning is the best way of learning rather than home because it does have more pros than cons in it. I personally believe, that all children should go to school regularly it is very much important in this era.
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- Some people think that in this modern world getting old is entirely bad However other people believe that the life of old people is much better now than it was in the past Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 353, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
.... I solely believe that schools, rather then E-learning, are imperative in the educa...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... in the education system. Meanwhile, an basic advantage of learning at schools ...
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Line 9, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t does have more pros than cons in it. I personally believe, that all children sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, then, well, while, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77192982456 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57767005007 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536842105263 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5831083481 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.615384615 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262550473826 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100592740408 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814947717017 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15056041952 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680807902833 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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