Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
There is no gainsaying the fact that teenagers are the building blocks of a country and their morals and ethics are what keep the society intact. Therefore, a fair amount of cohort opine that youngsters in their leisure time should do some community service for free, as this will be helpful to both them and the community. Even i accord with this belief because i feel that in doing so they will learn about teamwork and it will benefit their job prospects for the future. Although with such impeccable benefits there is a minor drawback to it as it is using up the free time of the teenagers which could be put to use in developing useful skills.
To initiate, when teenagers serve their community with good-will and not consider the monetary factor it helps them to work better. To explain this, a bunch of youngsters coordinate with the other people and get the job done. In other words, this job cannot be done alone and requires teamwork. For example, according to a survey conducted by the American Schools Board, the teenagres who did community service had a better rapport with their superiors than their counterparts. Therefore, it is crucial that teenagers cater their free time towards community even though they are not getting paid for it. However, it is not completely good to be true.
While teenagers are spending their leisure time in fulfilling the needs of the community, this time could be better spent elsewhere. To be precise, college youth are packed with their curriculum and formal exams, the free time they get should be rather spent on developing fine skills relating to their career. In the 2018 for instance, Harvard University said that their students applied for diploma courses in their respective fields in the holidays which led to a 10% overall increase in their scores. Hence, youngsters should focus on themselves and development of their skills in their free time.
All in all to conclude, even though there could be a slight development in one's job and lives by sparing leisure time towards improving their skills, I agree that serving the community is far better as it is done out of the heart and teaches good teamwork which is crucial in almost every aspect of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84473684211 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48626559734 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510526315789 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.6648416853 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.733333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341292886351 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121313947792 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564951187217 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206248497274 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711613016323 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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