Different people have different attitudes towards the unpaid community services. Certain people strongly believe that this type of service should be included in the high school study. Although, if it has pros it has cons too. I completely disagree with the former statement and I have given my reasons for it in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Predominantly, such unpaid services will divert the concentration of pupils toward their studies. As we know, these services needs a lot of time and as a result students will not get sufficient time for studying their important subjects like mathematics, science, English, et cetera. It is more important for the ward to learn these subjects rather than these community services as students will be employed on the basis of their qualifications and not on their social services.
Secondly, most of the parents will not find it to be safer enough for the ward to provide such community services as dealing with the patients in the hospital needs more mature people rather than younger ones. Also, some viruses attacks and enters the body of a young more rapidly than those of adults. For example, a survey was conducted, which proved that youngsters are more prone to the diseases caused by the germs of an infected person then the adults. Thus, it can cause some fatal diseases to the young children.
In conclusion, unpaid community services serves as helping hands to the poor people of the society, but it should not be allowed to compromise with the future and health of the young generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02723735409 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65588644989 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56420233463 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3109894646 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236854166368 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08104617788 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479295538929 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139094444574 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370864085695 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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