Inhabitants think that volunteer work for society is essential for pupils. I completely agree with the statement. In this essay firstly, we are going to discuss the importance of volunteer work and secondly, how it is beneficial for the person?
Firstly, Volunteer work is necessary for learning soft life skills, which we cannot learn without living in a specific environment. For instance, after completing my education in civil engineering. It is very arduous for me, to get a job. Dueto is inexperienced in the field. However, I have joined a company as volunteer work and in the consequence, after two months the company paid me a monthly salary and considering me a staff member.
Secondly, how it is beneficial? As I mention above from directly leaving the institute it's common for struggling for a job. When I have done volunteer work I learn a lot of soft skills for the rest of my life. For example, When I work as a volunteer, I acquire smart-working, planning, understanding people, team building, power of a team, analyzing the task requirement, and work break down structure. These all elements are essential for becoming a good manager. So it did not possible to learn these skills sitting in the classroom because all these activities related to outdoor work. Also, personally, I feel more confident and strong due to working in a difficult environment.
To recapitulate, I completely agree that at the early stage pupil should more depending than they can produce better results in every aspect of lives and become more beneficially for community, family, friends, relatives, subordinates, and co-workers.
- IELTS Writing Task 2 Education 56
- what is the causes and solutions of air pollution 61
- what is the causes and solutions of air pollution 56
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults 67
- Some people believe that unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of high school programmes for example working for a charity improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children To what extend do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ecessary for learning soft life skills. Which we cannot learn without living in a spe...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to working in a difficult environment. As I mentioned above I completely agree th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99593495935 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95254343303 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589430894309 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2981935422 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2941176471 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4705882353 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170320910291 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057423594682 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420463322026 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104820019714 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420529656598 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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