It is felt by some people that anyone can be made a teacher by teacher training courses, whereas others feel that pursuing a course cannot be made a great teacher. Personally, I can understand the two opposing points of view; I mostly agree with the latter viewpoint.
It is proved that teaching is the most stressful profession in all over the globe. Teachers are leader of a nation as their duty is so heavy, because they should nurture students to become future experts, doctors, engineers and so on. For instance, if a student has a motivated teacher that is very eager to transfer his or her science and knowledge to that student, the student will have a bright future and prosperity waits for the student. In addition, while teachers ought to educate students in the best way possible, they do not pay well. Hence, just passing teacher training courses are not sufficient to make a teacher a good one.
In contrast, some people believe that teacher training courses can make everybody a successful teacher. From their notion if somebody is totally deprived of any teaching talent could be able to teach at schools, colleges or universities. As an example, if somebody cannot find a desirable job can become an exceptional teacher just by passing teaching training courses. Therefore, there is no point for a person to become such a teacher with previous talent.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that becoming a remarkable teacher needs passion and talent and not anyone can become an outstanding one just with teacher training courses.
- Music should not be taught in schools instead other subjects such as computer and science should be taught.Do you agree or disagree with this statement. 73
- Students in school and university learn far more by lessons with their teachers compared to other sources(example: television and internet). Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people think that not all criminals should be kept in prison. Some criminals should do unpaid work to help other people in the community. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
- Some people feel that courses can make anyone a teacher while others feel an excellent teacher cannot be made by pursuing a course Discuss both view and give your own opinion 78
- Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than others sources such as internet and tv to what extent do you agree or disagree 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97307692308 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6799137803 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5036109373 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344072813762 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132772305391 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140924464156 0.0667982634062 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234648633572 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127436131561 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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