Many people agreed that marriage is a milestone and a sacred tradition between 2 adults joined together. However, there are many people who do not agree with the legal age for marriage that we currently uphold and I completely agree with the idea that we should raise the legal age of marriage to 21.
There are many benefits for raising the minimum age to get married. Firstly, young adults are still learning and experiencing life, they could explore their options and look for characteristics that fit for marriage. Such as responsibility and maturity which are the bedrock for marriage, partners who have both will be able to help you build a family and raise a child. In addition, they could minimize the divorce rate by understanding the personality and characteristics that they desired in marriage.
But many people are contend with the realistic approach in raising the legal age to 21. Modern generations are in a rush of getting married when they have not explored their options. In the age of technology, social media has glamorized married life which influenced many young adults to get married when they have not found a good candidate as their consort. In which, they will look for superficial characteristics that they find desirable such as physical attractiveness and sporting prowess, which could lead them to an unhappy marriage and possibly a divorce.
In conclusion, the current legal age for marriage can be beneficial by preventing adolescents from getting married too early but in my opinion, raising the minimum age for marriage can be beneficial for couples in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...happy marriage and possibly a divorce. In conclusion, the current legal age for m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0641509434 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85288010339 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51320754717 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8010919592 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207753347554 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850109840997 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723609771023 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138127144899 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645557117009 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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