Some people feel that young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others, however, believe that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this day and age, there has been a rising hot issue that young generation should follow their society in tradition way or not. Although I have to admit that this trend will a lot of benefits for youngsters, I would argue that it will better for young people if they can have chance to behave in accordance with their own choice.
On the one hand, it is widely believed that young generation ought to follow traditions of their nations. There are some reasons to explain for this tendency. Firstly, traditional methods help people to have a deepened understanding of societal standards. The previous generation went through a hosts of difficulties and barriers to accumulate meaningful lessons in order to spread to youngsters. Thanks to this, young people will have more proper behaviors in their lives. For instance, traditions can teach the young how to show their respect and gratitude to ancestors or grandparents and parents in their family. Furthermore, those social norms will lay the foundation for future career path , they will easily achieve the success in this society as there are some kinds of traditional worth is likely to be suitable for young people to apply to job orientation in the upcoming years.
On the one hand, I also share the concerns of people that it will do wonder for young people to select what they desire. First of all, the young will have the opportunity to develop their innate talents and discover new things in their life which not obey any social standards of country. For example, instead of forcing youngsters to follow the footsteps of previous generation related to future occupation, Parents should let the young be free to choose the kind of job they want. Secondly, when youngsters have to embrace with the old traditions, they will be prevented chances to expose to state-of-the-art technology, leading to the stagnant growth to certain extent in economic area for nation.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that though there are many advantages in following with societal norms, it will be a good choice for youngsters to have right to do anything they yearn for.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9606741573 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69469242995 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0547331474 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.142857143 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277912806661 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11113168716 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063055921365 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178670775323 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768570062441 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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