Some people prefer doing the same things all the time. Others, however, think that changes are necessary. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
The world today ischanging more rapidly than ever before. Still some individuals opt for never changing their ways and abiding by their habits, while others appear to welcome shifts and tackle them as a positive aspect of their lives. My personal opinion is that differences may have a dubious effect on our daily routine, however, a person should adapt to them. This essay will examine both views, but personally I advocate for accepting the changes as a driver of innovations.
One the one hand, sticking by the habitual actions is intrinsic to the way our brain works. When encountering familiar situations that imprinted positive experience or emotions in the past, an individual is likely to repeat the same actions. It might be a reinforcement for abiding by long-serving patterns. Our habits are no more than heuristics that facilitateour lives and make the process of decision-making straightforward. Therefore, many people decide not to accept changes and perform the same way all the time.
However, others are certain that alterations must be essential since they are the main driver of progress. Innovations have always been perceived as major achievements of the humankind. Welcoming changes enables people to adapt to novel situations and explore new possibilities. It could be the case that all individuals had to revise their old habits after lockdown was imposed in the majority of countries across the world as a means of tackling the spreading of Covid-19 pandemic. Working remotely has turned out to be a double-edged sword and, undoubtedly, only the ones who were prepared to adapt to new conditions succeeded.
To conclude, while many may believe that alterations are not crucial and performing the usual way is a safer option, I definitely agree with the ones who opt for accepting all kinds of shifts and utilizing them as a source of new opportunities and great experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18122977346 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98989195838 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611650485437 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0676119934 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.733333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113321676164 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369747483326 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523649797245 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620988216824 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277661103422 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.