Some people prefer to live in a house because it is east to maintain and it is within reachable distance. While others prefers houses since it would give privacy and space. In my view, it is better to live own house rather than apartment. I think both living in flat and house have brought many advantages and disadvantages to the people.
First, living in apartments within city limit provide a comfortable and easy transportation to work. There will be always security watching outside the gate of apartments. Not only security but also many security cameras and alarms will provide a safety for living. Parents can leave their children to play with their friends in the park without any problems. He/she does not have to worry about cleaning. However, there are disadvantages of living in apartments/flats. Due to urbanization, It is expensive to buy or rent an apartment.People do not get much privacy. Also, People are busy to notice their surroundings.
Similarly, living in houses also have advantages and disadvantages. People live in houses can get enough spacing and privacy. Children can play in area surrounding to the house. Some people like gardening, in such cases living in houses can benefit them. Owners of the houses can renovate or add extra room if they want to. Although, living in house can bring few disadvantages as well. Transportation will be difficult for people who live outside city limits. Security and protection will be in hands of owner. Even though, neighboring house will be nearby they may not in distance of hearing in an emergency situation.
To conclude people who live by their own, apartments would be good choice. For family, living in house will benefit them and bring happiness to family life.
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- IELTS 10 Test 1 Writing Task 1 - Academic 11
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an apartment' or simply 'apartments'?
Suggestion: an apartment; apartments
...ages to the people. First, living in an apartments within city limit provide a comfortable...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...ortable and easy transportation to work.There will be always security watching outsid...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Not
...watching outside the gate of apartments.Not only security but also many security ca...
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Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...ot have to worry about cleaning. However,there are disadvantages of living in an apart...
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Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an apartment' or simply 'apartments'?
Suggestion: an apartment; apartments
...er,there are disadvantages of living in an apartments/flats. Due to urbanization, It is expen...
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Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
...s expensive to buy or rent an apartment.People do not get much privacy. Also, People a...
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Line 5, column 598, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... they may not in distance of hearing in a emergency situation. To conclude peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, similarly, so, well, while, i think, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0553633218 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96224491503 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553633217993 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9294735822 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5714285714 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7619047619 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95238095238 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417234432545 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135228285155 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969311201838 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270478984921 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731975574352 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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