Some people prefer to live in rented homes. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
Selecting a place to live in and whether to rent it or own it is a big decision to make. Nowadays, one of the most problem is rented houses, flats, an apartments are not easily found. Some individuals choose to live in rented homes. In the following passage I will discuss advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, There is flew disadvantages of renting a house that have devastating impacts on the family unit. First of all, the majority of people have to spend a large amount of money on renting a house. For example, In the USA, Finding a accommodation do not easy to compare to Australia.In Chicago state, the rents are so high and almost 70% of individuals are not satisfied with the rent pay. Secondly, some of the landlords are imposing strange and exotic laws for the tenants such as not keeping a pet at house or holding loud parties after a particular time. Finally, getting use to new neighborhood is a serve challenge for the new tenants especially those who have children.
On the other hand, the advantages of renting an accommodation should not be neglected. Renting a house give the people the chance to invest money on other industrial fields such as funding a company, running a new market and the like. Furthermore, it is the best accommodation for overseas students who seeks for a place of living and they usually prefer to share a house with other students to mitigate the expenditures. Moreover, the tenants can easily change their house in case of any difficulties that they encounter such as noisy neighbors, inappropriate neighborhood and the like. To support my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine, indicates that in 2010 almost 50% of the immigrants to Canada preferred to stay in rental accommodation for the first year.
In conclude, people are prefer the rented homes and their is an advantage of their. the advantages by far outweigh them and the renting method has its advocates all over the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an apartment' or simply 'apartments'?
Suggestion: an apartment; apartments
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80116959064 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8558376398 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535087719298 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.417691846 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.625 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276963270034 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095472406486 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758832030505 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184784679809 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718710860764 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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