It is undoubtedly true that many people believe that advertising is significantly successful at persuading us to buy products while Others think that advertising is common that's why we do not pay concentrate much more on it. In my opinion advertising is a modern business field and it effect on people to purchasing products but it sometimes discover unnecessary that time people did not concentrat but advertise inform us new upcoming products.
On the one hand, advertising system is produced a new products that time they have to show that things front of people after watching this people want to buy this for their needs. Furthermore, companies make a advertise for growing their business, such as, keya group company wanted to produced their products in the market that time they have to make a advertise for selling their product. Additionally, without advertising people can not know a job circular and when people do not know circulars they have not any job and they are being an unemployed person in the countries economics. Besides, advertisement giving people to choice what they want and it helo for them and then they buy that things. Along with, it creats demands on products in the market.
On the other hand, advertising main ambition is controlled children on showing their presuading products. For example, they showing Their product front of children through advertise after seeing that children want this and they forced to purchase it their parents. Moreover, many tv channels can not produced cigarette advertise because it is illegal and that's why people oftenly does not concentrate over there. Along with, products can be risk and unhealthy which is present front of people and sometimes people does not pay attention over there. For instance, a unhygienic food like fast-food giving a advertise on the tv and other way that time people does not concentrate on this. In additional, after the continuously giving any types of advertisement anywhere than people does not give pay attention over there. Like, a dairy milk chocolate company giving their advertise what people already know long time ago and they can buy a chocolate to the shop that time can not attention over the advertisements.
To sum up, some people believe that advertising is achieve their sucess at persuading to us to buy things and others think it is random that why they have not to pay attention over that. So, advertising is a modern business and it work for people achieving concentration and it attract all the ages people to purchasing products and other side, some advertisement giving us unwanted product what we know already that's why that time we will not give attention on that advertise but it gives us many important Information on the advertisement.
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...ntion on that advertise but it gives us many important Information on the advertisement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 61.0 24.0651302605 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2313.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 458.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05021834061 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79688527939 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.412663755459 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 716.4 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.87484947 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.5625 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365815456929 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152961179669 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997883161545 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288799540949 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103322144808 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.