Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A healthy body enables students to concentrate on subjects they are learning, helps staff to work efficiently, and adds to pleasure in daily life. Thus, it is important to improve public health. Some contend that building sports facilities is the best way, while other maintain that those facilities exert limited impacts and enhancing health levels entail other measures. In my opinion, sports centers are not necessary and people cannot benefit a lot from those facilities.
Some people believe that the best way to improve local people's health is to increase the number of sports facilities. They argue that those facilities such as gyms can provide opportunities for residents to exercise. Jogging in the street can be dangerous and going climbing usually takes people a great deal of time. Therefore, people can play sports in the gyms, which saves plenty of time and protect people from vehicles in the street. In addition, people will enjoy doing sports in those stadiums because they can exercise regardless of weather. When it is raining or snowing, outdoor activities like hiking and jogging become impractical..
However, others including me consider that those sports facilities would not necessarily convince people into more exercise. Firstly, although gyms facilitate people to work out, average people cannot afford the admission of those centres. In China, people have to pay one thousand or even more to buy the one-year ticket to the gym. Moreover, building sports centres can cost the local government lots of money. In the countryside, the government is not able to support such investment on the construction of new buildings. Accordingly, government could take other measurements. Organizing badminton competitions in the local area can encourage residents to practice playing badminton. Another possible measurement is that overweight people can get rewarded when they make progress in losing weight.
In conclusion, while sports facilities may offer benefits, public health will not be significantly improved by building more sports center. Other measures like competitions and rewards can inspire people to exercise more frequently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51651651652 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78726890828 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57957957958 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4673497186 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.85 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.65 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237128110712 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772985532621 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921845195227 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160022541201 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366512802832 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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