Public health has been always a sophisticated issue in each society and over the several years. Mostly people believe that sports facilities should be increased to improve the health of humans, while others opine that other measures are more effected rather than raising the number of sports. I will discuss both views as well my opinion in the upcoming paragraph.
Each and every individual of society are taking keen interest in sports because of certain reasons. To begin with, youngsters can get an opportunity to take participate in different sports activities such as badminton, volleyball and swimming which is very beneficial for stay healthy and fit. In addition, adults are not only know about the competition level, discipline and sportsmanship but also saves himself from the consumption of drugs and joining bad accompany.
Moreover, individuals are feel energetic and relax their mind from busy schedule by doing some sports activities which reduces stress and tensions. It also decreases the level of heart and skin diseases. Furthermore, sports are increasing the co-operation and remain peace among nations which reduces war and to make public health more secure.
On the other hand, sports are less effective in case of public health, other measures should be used which is more effective and the better way to change the sedentary lifestyle of masses. Firstly, government should be imposed higher tax on fast food which is very helpful to decrease the overweighting problem. Secondly, usage of public transport by individuals are diminish the obstacle of traffic congestion and pollution level in a country. Thirdly, with the help of media, society should be aware about the cleanliness and then make home neat and clean to cope with spreading problems.
To sum up, Majority of human beings are not doing sports activities. So, different measures are working well because of government and individuals are taking enough effort to protect himself and society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 368, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'diminished'.
Suggestion: diminished
... of public transport by individuals are diminish the obstacle of traffic congestion and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, while, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33650793651 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69838281963 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612698412698 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3648509521 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.066666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7333333333 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220105370409 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660795908286 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858119011874 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116949228917 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819239759666 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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