Poverty and hunger, are still major problems in todays world. However, some considered economic boost as a useful tool, while others think it cause environmental problems. The essay will discuss both the views and will give personal opinion.
On the one hand, people who in the side of former side expect the industrialization growth in the part of the earth where the people under the povert conditions. Therfore, it will provide employments to the residents, so it become a source of their earnings which end up the poverty. Moreover, hunger is a second big issue of decusion, researchers should do search to growth the production of crops. Interestingly, when the production become more from consumption huger will die automatically.
On the other hand, advocates of environmental side viewed it harmful for autmosphere, they believe that it is a negative development. For example the more availability of companies produce more pollution, which can cause the global warming and climate change. Not only this but also, the over use of fertiliser can be the reason on air pollution.
In conclusion, after watching both the sides I safely reach on result that boom in economic only single way to eliminate the poverty and hunger.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, second, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16915422886 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96042893877 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661691542289 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4859540731 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.4545454545 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252716363003 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796626819267 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606131119024 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14430160064 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756247994452 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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