It is said that History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. In my opinion, technology and science are important for some sectors like IT, medical or logistics. For instance, I want to be an IT employee so technology is vital for me. If you do not want to get exposed to this niche, you just need the basic knowledge for serving you in normal work. Science is the same, just doctor needs a lot of knowledge about them. History is different that makes you love your country and know about heros of your nation and either about history of other countries so you can talk about them when you see foreigners.
On the other hand, history is very important when you want to be an artist or singer because sometimes you need to create picture or a song about history. As a result, every subject is critical and it makes you know what you are good at and helps you feel better to choose your job in the future. For me, science and technology are not forced to learn but the love and loyalty for the country that you live in will motivate you to pick up the history knowledge, so for people who do not know and want the occupations or their jobs do not have connection with the two other subjects, they always think history is more important, for people who want to be in the fields of science and technology, these subjects are certainly essential.
In conclusion, every subject is necessary at equal level and knowing what we want in the future is important too, so by studying all of the subjects when you are in primary, secondary and high school would create a foundation for you to identify which subject is more suitable for yourselves and then make final decision.
- New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer Do you agree or disagree 84
- self introduction paragraphs Group 07 11
- The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008 84
- The diagram shows how chocolate is produced Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 292, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...r logistics. For instance, I want to be an IT employee so technology is vital for me....
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...future is important too, so by studying all of the subjects when you are in primary, secon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, you know, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.534375 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40956549182 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49375 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.128468234 49.4020404114 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.909090909 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0909090909 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296548627385 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150692590148 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126271898867 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219827820855 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617370278933 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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