There is often debate whether History is the most important school subject or Science and Technology. In my opinion the latter is more needed in this modern area of life.
On the one hand, people who choose History over the Sciences and Technology in regard their importance believe that for political success having knowledge about past generations' political practice can be beneficial. As they insist that History repeats itself and by having in depth grasp on it one can learn valuable life lessons. For instant, after the blasting atomic bomb in Hiroshima during the World-War-II all governments become conscious and over-sensitive over building nuclear weapons. Moreover, by studying History, students can learn about their ancestors and grew a sense of identity as well as sense of patriotism.
On the other hand, advancement in technology and communication as well as medicine all has been happened because of Science and Technology. We find convenience and higher standard of living relying on the ever-growing new innovations. The life expectancy has increased, better health care facilities are offered to public which are the fruit of these courses. In addition to this, most people confirm that they are unable to recall any word of their history subject that they have studied at school and find it useless to their current situations.
In conclusion, it is true that the role of History in some area of our life is inevitable but in my opinion the Science and Technology which provide us with comfortable life are more substantial. Furthermore, for reading History no tutor is required and anyone in any age can learn it by their own but the success in any other subjects is highly dependent on teachers' ability to teaching.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 360, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...y other subjects is highly dependent on teachers ability to teaching.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14035087719 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80577604124 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571929824561 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4865772515 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.083333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276613079902 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927346570924 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853448338944 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176686559249 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545163278591 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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