The modern world is extremely aware and conscious of ecological problems that occurred hundreds of years ago but are expanded nowadays. Environmental activists split up into those who mostly care about endangered species of flora and fauna, and others that are concerned about global warming, deforestation, etc. The question is what issue is more important for the present day and thus requires a solution now.
The former problem consequences can be seen quite impressive since there is a number of species that have been extinct already. Furthermore, some of them are on the verge of extinction right now, for instance, Chinese pandas of which there are less than a hundred left in the whole world. The same situation is observed with Amur tigers and many other animals, who are hardly bred in zoos to prevent their extinction. The extent of variation within species affects the further evolution of humankind and technological progress, according to the fact that a range of inventions was either inspired by some analysis of animal behavior or obtained from unique biological research on components of fauna.
On the other hand, there is a great list of environmental issues that affect human evolution today or in a short time, namely global warming, water and noise pollution, deforestation, etc. Society continues to worsen these by the absence of preventive actions because the consequences are not considerable enough in daily life. Few hundred years from now, and clean water will not be approachable for everyone like it is now. This is the main reason why eco-activists are concerned about other problems more.
In conclusion, every environmental problem needs at least some active actions despite its importance. Although solving the latter problems will have effects on the problem of endangered species, therefore, in my opinion, it is reasonable to solve them first.
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 61
- Some people belive that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 61
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 89
- Some people say that History is one of the most important school subjects Others think that in today s world subjects like science and technology are more important than History Discuss both these views and give your opinion 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ent day and thus requires a solution now The former problem consequences can be s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, at least, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14238410596 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77552386763 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609271523179 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 302.0 20.2975951904 1488% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1553.0 106.682146367 1456% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 302.0 20.7667163134 1454% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 121.0 7.06120827912 1714% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227560503283 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227560503283 0.084324248473 270% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138423569567 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466635610869 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 153.8 13.0946893788 1175% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -243.51 50.2224549098 -485% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 122.3 11.3001002004 1082% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.01 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.96 8.58950901804 267% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 122.8 10.1190380762 1214% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 123.0 10.7795591182 1141% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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