Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is true that, in this contemporary era, animals and plants are being died nowadays at an unprecedented rate in all over the world. Moreover, number of individuals contemplate that this is the main cause of environmental problems whereas, other group of masses introspect that there are more significant environmental problems and I am also totally agreed with this statement.

To commence with, factories are being escalated day by day which are creating pollutions like, air, noise and water. Due to air pollution our ozone layer is in danger not only this but human beings and whole flora and fauna. Furthermore, people are having to confront problems like, cancer, heart diseases and so on. Secondly, new roads and buildings are being constructed these days by cutting infinite trees that is why global warming is rising year by year. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that more than 65% factories are producing different type of pollution which are also the causes of environmental problems.

On the other hand, although plants and animals play an indispensable role in our food chain, scientists prefer to use animals for checking different type of gadgets on them. For example, in this covid pandemic era, scientists are trying to make new vaccines for people but first vaccines are being used on animals for checking that there is any allergy or hazard sign or not. Additionally, human beings are in more percentage as compared to animals which is not a great signal for us.

On a concluding note, undoubtedly, losing our flora and fauna are the cause of environmental problems yet, we must understand that there are overabundance of reasons available. Eventually, I personally believe that government should make some policies or start camping to stop these things.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13559322034 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86613326767 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2941556215 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196819561195 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673814613394 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542700550005 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12015191906 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444001419632 0.056905535591 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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