People’s opinions differ as to whether or not advanced technology today facilitates shopping. While modern technology provides its users with a more convenient and time-effective shopping environment, I still believe that it bears some inconveniences, including the absence of try-on opportunities and inadequate refund policies.
On the one hand, online shopping is superior to the traditional shopping method in terms of its 24/7 services. Due to the unlimited operating hours of the internet, users can make a purchase order whenever they want. Those shopping traditionally, by contrast, have to do shopping at a fixed time. Additionally, online shoppers have more chances to get a deep insight into commodities in terms of their quality, prices and comments from other customers through the internet. Those shopping physically, however, have to travel a lot or even long distances to find only the goods they need, leading them to waste much time.
In spite of the above arguments, I support the view that technological advancements make shopping more complicated. Firstly, for clothes purchased through the internet, trying them on is virtually impossible. Without the ability to physically check, e-commerce customers can only base on specification information from online stores, they are more likely to feel unfit or even minor scatches when receiving the real goods. Additionally, refund policies complicate online shopping. In reality, the process of refunding a commodity is more time-consuming and complicated as customers have to fill out a set of forms, wait for responses from stores as well as a real video about products opened. Those shopping conventionally, on the other hand, can exchange new ones or receive reimbursement more easily in such a case.
As a result, I believe that online shopping has many benefits, including convenience and time-efficiency, but it has many drawbacks in terms of refunding and checking products in advance. I am also convinced that online shopping will be more popular if e-commerce sellers alter their selling and after-selling policies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
People’s opinions differ as to whether or not advanced technology today facilitates s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, well, while, as to, as a result, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51083591331 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20048676435 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594427244582 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.232556897 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138962791616 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512956240405 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565640292589 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971679714277 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719044521185 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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