Having developed in the early period of human beings, music has become an essential piece in most people’ daily lives. In the modern era, the public has raised a discussion about whether music is of the significant advantage of tightening people’s relationship towards the others. In this essay, I would give some explanation to support my approval of this belief.
In the first place, I strongly believe that music is a form of art that is suitable for a bulk of people regardless of the variety of backgrounds or ages. Ordinary audiences are not required to have a certain level of education or prosperity in order to enjoy music. Because music reflects each person's characteristics and their deep desires in life rather than any other qualifications. No matter what language we speak or understand, we appreciate the melody and depth of music which is why people of all ages can sit together and enjoy the same music.For example, one of the most notable song “Happy New Year” by ABBA is still remain its position all around the world, in spite of being released many years ago.
The aforementioned benefit of music is compounded by the relaxed effects which are of crucial help in order to reduce human mental tension. These practices have been long used in medical care for stress. Patients are likely to recover from their obstacles in life which prevent them from appreciating their lives and result in self-isolation with the others. This, thus, turns out to be a key rationale for the reason why music is a crucial piece in festivals and special events.
After having considered the aforementioned arguments in some depth, I have concluded that music and everything connected with it can be a good tool for communicating with different nations and generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, still, thus, for example, in spite of, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8410593791 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7779830609 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.166666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206777599233 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659104724064 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416916071141 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12283602243 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414963193009 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.