In modern days, one of the controversial issues related to purposes to learn a new language. Although some people tend to strongly believe that studying foreign language need to working in and traveling to another country, in my opinion, learning a new language may have another reason. In this essay, I will consider that many students are preparing for the official language test and then secondly what problem face to people working in and traveling to a new country.
On one side of the argument, there are people who claim that international students studying in foreign nations have increased last years, which mean that they already experienced such official language exam as ielts and toepl that give chance to study in top universities throughout the world. The primary reason for believing this is that top 100 universities of the world require a high score of the official language test. It is also possible to argue that in order to study in these universities, many people have learned the English language. One important illustration of this is research shown that international students studying at the Tsinghua University of Chinese learned a new language with one purpose which is only to study in that school.
On the other hand, it is argued that in fact, workers and tourists in another nation study a foreign language because they face issues of communication cause of lack of knowledge of the language. Moreover, they have acquired knowledge of the language before visiting another country because they feel isolated senses after coming there. One important illustration of this is in Australia refugees who have been working studied the English language in order to communicate with each other.
In conclusion, as we have seen, many people study a new language for another purpose than working and traveling, for example, studying at university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13770491803 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74832337544 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495081967213 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9462532156 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.454545455 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242212496344 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103837028232 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594785150129 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154489157783 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682391482253 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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