High life style has become a status symbol now a days as everyone wants to have all luxuaries to live a beautiful life. Majority of people think that city lifestyle improves the lifestyles of people but others consider it worse. While I support that city lifestyle helps people in improving their living standard , this has some negative impact too on the life of the people.
On the one hand , this is true that city lifestyle uplifts the living standard of people. First of all, in these days high lifestyle and attitude is above all because people judge someone from his or her personality more than anything else. So, people who has been living in cities mostly has good lifestyle and they are independent. Moreover, in cities both genders are working and live life according to their choices rather than following others instructors. Additionally, people get more facilities in the cities than in countryside that is why they has been living a comfortable life.
On the other hand, the busy life style of the city has also some worse impacts. Firstly, people has communication gap as they do not have time even to interact with family members because both men and women are working there. As a result, people has forgotten either the importance of relationships or the value of grand parents. Secondly, pollution is increasing day by day in the cities due to factories which leads to various diseases to the people that results in poor health. Finally, people does not have fresh meals to eat as because of lack of space they can not grow vegetables and fruits they fo have to depend on the markets which is a big problem.
To conclude, although city lifestyle improves the living standard of people yet it proves as worse In many situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as for, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83056478405 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55074734487 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541528239203 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.663817875 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.857142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407155819304 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150850385582 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783145004351 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256222258052 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874152828919 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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