It is considered by some individuals that ecological issue of climate change has a harmful impact on business development, while others say that given problem open new capabilities for this. Although the government would focus only on dealing with humidity change, however, this development ought to cause tremendous interest in products related to health and migration. I do partially agree with both given views.
There is no doubt that ecological dilemma is one of the most widely spread tendencies having been solved by means of meetings in international organizations such as the UN. If states were dwelling on climate change, the business would not be maintained with governmental aid. For instance, coronavirus pandemic which is also an issue touching the entire globe caused tones of unfortunate trends including the bankruptcy of commercial companies.
On the contrary, given a hypothetical situation have advantageous sides also as well as for business. Nowadays, covid-19 can be compared with climate change due to the fact that humanity is experiencing first global question over the whole period of time. Assets of companies working online are rose marginally. For instance, the amount of income of NETFLIX replaced the figures DISNEY. In addition, Amazon’s incoming quantity of capital increased by 200 million over 2 months.
In conclusion, 2 given opinions are not unreasonable since the glance for a global problem depends on the angle of view. Of course, climate change is a global problem that might lead to devastating consequences in the world economy; nevertheless, any problem can be solved by means of alternative and new ways of working
- Some people say that young people learn useful skills by playing electronic and computer games Others say that young people who play electronic and computer games are wasting their time Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Some people believe that people should retire at 65 While others believe that they should be allowed to work as long as they want to What is your view point Discuss 81
- Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs To what extent do you agree 78
- In many countries more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally Why people buy imported food What could be done to encourage people to buy local food 78
- You are writing your first letter to a pen pal Describe your previous studies and work experience your current activities hobbies and interests Tell your pen pal that you will be visiting him her 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... also an issue touching the entire globe caused tones of unfortunate trends inclu...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ng first global question over the whole period of time. Assets of companies working online are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, while, as for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, of course, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38549618321 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99157032953 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645038167939 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.09997163 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136083932964 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419259280426 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488948857283 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785014544478 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022407844664 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.