Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think people should be free to choose.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, extreme sports become a new-trend activity among the youth to explore their capabilities. However, some people think that it should be postponed due it is a bad-role model. In a certain degree, people really can choose whether it is advantageous or not.
First of all, without a proper guidance from the professionals, a juvenile could follow the extreme performance and can affect a severe cause. Take, for example, a child who always watches an extreme motorcycle jumping on the rails wants to show off his friends that he could. Afterward, due to the absence of knowledge, his motorcycle would crash the street and he will suffer for some injuries. For this term, the raid trail motorcycle sports will get such negative response from parents because of that tragedy. In that way, one of the family members will prosecute the tournament and it could be banned.
Contrastively, extreme sports become a beneficial way to some attractive children in exploring their limit. A bike would be only meant for transportation. But soon after, the creative sportsman found the method to rotate over the air with a bike. It is finally recognized by the alternative-sport tool. This riding method leads a creative community of freestyle bike to seek a new talent. For some of the reason, if the dangerous sports is dismissed, then the creative athletes never find a talent.
Above all, despite there is some minor cause due to extreme sport it also can support children to find their talent. However, in my opinion, extreme sport should not always be tagged by bad influencer as long as the parents can control the children and know exactly their professionalism.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...reestyle bike to seek a new talent. For some of the reason, if the dangerous sports is dism...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, really, so, then, for example, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02166064982 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84623099923 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584837545126 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4600147735 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9375 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192504572237 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642395241931 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803611979791 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126681700864 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727489947013 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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