More extended break motivates the employees to do their tasks better so some people say that employers should give a more extended break. In my opinion, I agree that longer breaks ought to be provided by employers as it will benefit both the employer and employee.
A good reason to provide employees with a more extended break is that it motivates employees. An employee feels valued and part of the company. Further, it gives employees the impression that the employer looks after their well-being. According to a survey, longer breaks has been considered the most valuable non-monetary perks. Employees feel content with longer breaks and do not leave the company and, therefore, resulting in a low attrition rate.
Because of the contend feeling, employees work with more concentration. They bring in the innovative ideas which may help the company to increase their revenues manifold. Since they feel associated with the employer, they work harder to achieve the results. The efficiency of the employees increases as it gives a feeling of paying back the rewards and perks provided by the employer.
Finally, longer break results in better health of employees both mental and physical. More extended break rejuvenates the employee as they get to spend time with their family and friends. Also, during such long break employees can plan to visit the places. All these relax the mind, and it is said that “a relaxed mind is a better and a sharper mind”.
In conclusion, a long holiday is essential to motivate the employees and for their better health. The cost of absenteeism will be recouped by the better performance and low attrition rate.
- in countries where unemployment is high, education should only be obligatory up to primary school and not secondary school. to what extent do you agree or disagree. 61
- Some parents believe that reading entertainment books is waste of time. In their opinion, children should read only serious, educational books. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include relevant examples from your own experience. 67
- In countries where unemployment is high, education should only be obligatory up to primary school and not secondary school. To what extend do you agree or disagree. 67
- The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the d 84
- Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community.Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: suggest someone who deserves the reward. mention what they have done to help the community. say what reward y 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...in a low attrition rate. Because of the contend feeling, employees work with more conce...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ter performance and low attrition rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12087912088 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67136204587 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8592540957 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.2352941176 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19145221896 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662118684898 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062456891688 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119531133033 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625063210792 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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