Some people belive that governments should forbidden risks sports, but others think they should have freely to play any sports or activity. So this essay will discuss both of opinion.
On the one hand, when the governments ban dangerous sports it means they will take a way the hobby of some people. This is a reason for their bored and tired, they will find their life have nothing interesting. Maybe the risk sport are effort for their continuing the life. When they do their hobby is the time they enjoy the life , live for their own and be theirself. Also debar dangerous sports means that they inhibit the creative of people. For instance, skydiver will find the way most easy and safety to the ground when they leave the plane.
On the other hand, when government have freedom to do risks sports it is very dangerous to their life. Just a little mistake can take their life. And also do dangerous sports leave a lot of influence for them , when they older their bone and muscle can not strong as people who do not play risks sports. But do risk sports can train for them more confident and brave. For example, mountain climber have to cope with thier affaid when look into the ground but they passed this and climb to the top of the mountain.
To conclude, in my opinion government should freedom to do any sports and activity because these is their hobby so government can not ban this. Government should respect all of people and their hobby. And also this sport can be develop for their country in the neur future
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have forbidden' or 'forbid'?
Suggestion: have forbidden; forbid
...e people belive that governments should forbidden risks sports, but others think they sho...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is essay will discuss both of opinion. On the one hand, when the governments ba...
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Line 2, column 332, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ir hobby is the time they enjoy the life , live for their own and be theirself. ...
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Line 2, column 360, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...joy the life , live for their own and be theirself. Also debar dangerous sports ...
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Line 2, column 379, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'debars'.
Suggestion: debars
... for their own and be theirself. Also debar dangerous sports means that they inhibi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the ground when they leave the plane. On the other hand, when government have ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sports leave a lot of influence for them , when they older their bone and muscle c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and climb to the top of the mountain. To conclude, in my opinion government sh...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Government should respect all of people and their hobby. And also this sport can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56204379562 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12898008109 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481751824818 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2954456509 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.125 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310497306535 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12351356061 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117405395944 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253936277045 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132085595035 0.056905535591 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 50.2224549098 158% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.