Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Creative artists and musicians are the corner stone of a countries arts and culture. Some people often believed that, financial support to this artists would be helpful too them, while others oppose this statement and argued to find another option for funding's. However, in my opinion, financial back up from the side of government would be advantageous for the artists who make the country's pride on skyward.
On the one hand, expenditure for well creative arts and culture by an efficient artists has been escalating in terms of material and resources, stages and viewership and so on. Owing to the fact that, government may offer a sponsorship and money support to the artist for the creativity would be more beneficial to them. Such recognition would enhance the artists ability to the core and they may open up as much as they can. For instance, world famous music director from UK bought up by the help of government sponsorship program from the school periods. Moreover, many elderly artists who gave their life time achievements to the nations have suffering multitude of problems related to health and wealth. Owing to the fact that, it is government liability to protect them in secure way by financially.
On the other hand, some people oppose to the point because, artists may have a choice to find a well job or income by their creativity. In other words, by the support of media they could have a fund in order to attend reality shows, stage programs, cultural events and so on. Most of the artists who is retired from the field manually used to be a post in judgmental and teaching or tuition fields. For example, many reality shows judging faculties are the elder artists and famous by the field of creativity.
On balance, in my perspective, rather find a financial support oneself, government have had a responsibility towards every artists who needs help. Irrespective of, government supports a vast majority of artists may fail to be succeed in certain areas by the financial crisis. Furthermore, high costly artistic materials and resources may not be affordable to the people who does not have proper income to flourish the creativity.
To sum up, creative artists are always an asset to the countries cultural, traditional, and artistic developments. Thereby, it is government obligation to support them financially to some extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04846938776 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78433915188 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520408163265 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0669038486 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.944444444 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288072218572 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999193222721 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478067339916 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186238451857 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388783146423 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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