In this contemporary society, whether global days with out car are considered as an effective solution for air pollution or there are other methods has become a controversial issue. From my point of view, those statements embrace their own benefits and I will discuss both of these views in my essay.
On the one hand, there are many positive effects what days without cars bring to our society. First and foremost, the principle one is that this can lessen the exhaust fumes into the atmosphere which results in promoting air quality and decreasing some health-related problems of the citizens naming respiratory diseases. Take some metropolitan areas like Beijing and New York as an illustration, there are a large number of cars on the street every day and this is one of the main elements contributing to air pollution since this type of vehicle emits emissions that damage to the environment. If there are global car free days, this will minimize significantly the amount of carbon dioxide releasing into the atmosphere and make a big change in the long run as well.
On the other hand, despite the advantages of international days without cars, there are also other various feasible solutions that we should consider. Initially, environmentally friendly vehicles without emissions are highly recommended to use. For example, we can use electric cars instead of conventional cars from some big brands naming Tesla, Vinfast or Toyota .On top of that, it is the government's responsibility to the citizens to encourage citizens to use public transportation including buses or underground to commute. As a result, there will be less exhaust fumes from cars releasing into the atmosphere and air environment will not be damaged by air pollution.
Taking every thing into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that both international days without cars and some enlisted measures are all advantageous in their own way. I honestly hope that people can do compatible way in order to reduce air pollution.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...ntemporary society, whether global days with out car are considered as an effective solu...
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Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... New York as an illustration, there are a large number of cars on the street every day and this i...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...ges of international days without cars, there are also other various feasible solutions that we shou...
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Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...g brands naming Tesla, Vinfast or Toyota .On top of that, it is the governments re...
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Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...brands naming Tesla, Vinfast or Toyota .On top of that, it is the governments resp...
^^
Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...st or Toyota .On top of that, it is the governments responsibility to the citizens to encou...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, honestly, if, so, well, for example, as a result, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19018404908 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00629772941 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576687116564 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4784632433 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297253433137 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101182990899 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593385177343 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187654308722 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560166988917 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...ntemporary society, whether global days with out car are considered as an effective solu...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... New York as an illustration, there are a large number of cars on the street every day and this i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...ges of international days without cars, there are also other various feasible solutions that we shou...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...g brands naming Tesla, Vinfast or Toyota .On top of that, it is the governments re...
^^
Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...brands naming Tesla, Vinfast or Toyota .On top of that, it is the governments resp...
^^
Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...st or Toyota .On top of that, it is the governments responsibility to the citizens to encou...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, honestly, if, so, well, for example, as a result, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19018404908 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00629772941 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576687116564 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4784632433 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297253433137 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101182990899 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593385177343 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187654308722 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560166988917 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.