Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the society, playing sports become more popular with people. They create many sports which purpose provide their healthy, and connect people more knit closer. Some people believe that kind of sport like football which is less advantage than some individual sports like tennis or swimming. In fact, each sport brings especially positives for sports player, and how people can practice it is more important.
On the one hand, sports players can benefit significantly from being a part of the team. Firstly, they can develop social skills. In a group, they need to convey information each other, and assist a colleague when they have a trouble about their physical, or do not understand some campaign from a leader. All of these things make people can advance their teamwork skills, so they are going to get easily achievement among a competition. For example, when footballer in U23 Vietnam play soccer with U23 Korean, some player like Quang Hai, or Duc Trinh they have an excellent skill, and often display their skills in a match, but in that match they do not use too much their abilities instead of, they collaborate with their team, and bring the victory for Vietnamese people. Secondly, people can expand their network, at least in other teammates. In one team, some people come from another country in the world, so they can learn some knowledge about culture, lifestyle, and additional language from teammates.
On the other hand, the solo sport also brings more effective for the player. Enhancing skills which are necessary factor, and encourage people to want to play independent. In order to they do not want to hear and direct from a curriculum leader, they want to create their form stylist. For instance, Michael Phelps is the best player who has more prizes and defeats many sports players in the world, and also he is the celebrity and has sports fans. It also evident that individual sports make people more competitive, and they always want to get more awarded, and feels fulfilling the victory.
In my opinion, people enjoy team playing or solo playing sports which also have the benefit. I promise that they should choose the sports which are useful, and get more health from themselves. However, I believe that playing in the team is more advantageous than that, including increasing teamwork, and learn some experiences from teammates.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 344, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... learn some experiences from teammates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, for instance, in fact, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00507614213 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4452941595 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51269035533 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 15.0 0.809619238477 1853% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6952567799 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.789473684 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7368421053 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254723353432 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101236481592 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784254816246 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195917434709 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923244081594 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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