It is true that, in this contemporary era, everyone wants to live in a newly houses that is why this idea is being gained lots of popularity in all over the world. However, some introspect that modern homes should be built in the traditional style whereas, others believe government should give consent to built new houses according to their taste. According to my perspective, having a new home creates a good impression on other from our sides.
To start with, there are numerous points on this. Firstly, people want to show their wealth on the basis of their home. Secondly, they want to live in a fully modernized house like CCTV cameras, chimneys, air conditioner e. t. c. because it is not possible in any traditional house and it is extremely hard to put these things in those houses. For example, it plays a critical role in our economy due to the fact more and more high rises buildings are being constructed steadily and people are living together. In addition, they prefer to use a number of renewable resources for lights and it saves our environment too.
Looking at the other view, people contemplate that sizeable majority shall prepare same houses in color, size, e. t. c. owing to the fact that it plays a gigantic role in our culture. Furthermore, they have keen interest to keep their culture for forever and It shows adore for each other. For instance, we have one place in India name as varindavan. It is highly recommended place by people in all over the world due to its dilapidated culture.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly we should follow our culture or history because these play vital role in our life yet, we must understand that people have their own rights, and they can do everything whatever they want according to their choice. However, as far as I concerned, government should form a law that externally building should be like a traditionally building and internally we could build or change our home according to our preference.
- Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes cars and other items What are the reasons for this Do you think it is a positive or a negative development 89
- Some people say that sports play an important role in society Others however think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- In many Countries the amount of crime is increasing What do you think are the main causes of Crime How can we deal with those causes 61
- The rate of youth crime is rising in many countries What are the causes of this trend Suggest some solutions to decrease such rate 56
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79765395894 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67044184005 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574780058651 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4936564542 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.25 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255342984257 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748814989481 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791862989366 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153805956729 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520845482372 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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