Some people think public libraries is necessary.however others beleive that the public library is useless.Dicuss both views and give your opinion?
Certainly,it's true that in this contemporary era,with the accelerate speed of technology people introspect that constructing new libraries are unncesssareis.however,on the flip side people think that it's good . I personally believe that libraries are very useful for people.
To start with, firstly, libraries are useful for those people who have no money for getting education but they want to study.secondly, some University students or office people also go in libraries because they want a peaceful atmosphere for doing their own work. In addition,there are different types of books with full information and if a person have interest in any book so he would easily issue that book on some security and he have not to buy that book.for instance,I usually go in libraries beacuse I love to read different types of books and I could read all books in free .
Looking at the other view, firstly, people are using internet alot for getting any information in any field rather than go in libraries.secondly, people could read all information about anything whenever they want and they have not to go anywhere. Thirdly, internet save our time as compared to public libraries.for example, Wikipedia is very famous page in all over the world if u want to get any information about sports, studies, musicians e.t.c. so you could get all information in just one click . It's useful for working people who have no more time to learn anything .
On a concluding note, undoubtedly these days public libraries is not useful beacuse of advanced technology yet,we must understand that public libraries are good for those people who have no financial support or those people who have no space for studying.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12996389892 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11119151947 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537906137184 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.651208634 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.625 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.625 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.125 7.06120827912 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173190620689 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855183287433 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494196423402 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123321951568 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435795375622 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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