It is undeniable fact that the children will learn about civic responsibility from the community work. it is often argued that a student should focus more on academics instead of anticipating extra-curricular activities. However, students participating in social work will result in several fruitful ways in their lives and I firmly concur with the given notion.
Teenagers who join for voluntary work in their leisure time holds a wide range of constructive benefits. To begin with, the fact that adolescents receive a perfect opportunity to explore hidden talents who are participating in charitable activities. Additionally, it is a first-time for a child to feel that they are a part of something bigger. Moreover, voluntary work is a powerful way to teach pupils about morals and empathy towards society. Also, recent studies show that children who take part in community work are likely to do better in schools, avoid engaging in risky behavior, and easily graduate from colleges.
Furthermore, students who are involving in social work can learn from real-world activities which makes the learning more memorable and impactful in their lives. Subsequently, this kind of work helps teens, as well as children, becoming skillful, confident, and experienced about the real-life challenges that happen outside the school. Besides, it motivates a child for developing his or her career in fruitful ways.
To conclude, in my opinion, community work is a part of a noble clause. Therefore, parents should encourage their children to participate in this kind of work in their leisure time that will be beneficial for their future.
- one of your friend invited you and your family for a meal in his home Write a letter Thank them and tell what you enjoyed most How did you feel Also invite him with his family to your house 56
- More children in developed countries are becoming overweight This is a serious problem for wealthy countries Discuss some causes and effects of this problem Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experien 84
- Television dominates the free time of too many people It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others Do you agree or disagree 78
- Most employers do job interviews before offering a position to a person Do you think this is the best way to do it or are there better alternatives What is the best method of choosing employees in your opinion REWRITE 56
- Some people say that school education is useless Others say that it is important Discuss both views and give your opinion 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...responsibility from the community work. it is often argued that a student should f...
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Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...om colleges. Furthermore, students who are involving in social work can learn from real-worl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32945736434 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01726946578 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0719739417 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.769230769 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174930088507 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586044991184 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465935158873 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109254009197 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047619490006 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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