It is often argues that few believe in there are various of profits in going to private secondary schools. While numerous assume that these types of schools can have bad effects on the whole society. This essay will discuss both sides as far as i am concerned i am in favour of former notion.
To commence with the former notion, it is the best for the poor children. To explain it, when the needy kids to come this school for study and their parents can not give the fees for their toddlers. They can learn anything from this type of academy. All studies are free for teenagers. They give the one time food to the children. For example, a survey was conducted by the Canadian university found that 90% students study from those institution and they become the good businessman. Hence, they are successful and earn more funds in their life.
Shifting towards latter notion, some of bad impact on the society because their children go to the wrong path. To elaborate it, when the cheap society teenager come to school. There are many bad habits in this type of kids. others students go with this type of toddlers and they go to wrong path. There are numerous bad effect on the society with this kind of youngster. To epitome, a headline was published by "THE MOSCOW TIMES" newspaper revealed that 85% crime increases in the public just because of their children whose do evil works. As a result, they can go to jail for their inaccurate works.
Finally, although is is good for needy people as well as dangerous for the society yet i believe that private schools is best for the middle class families,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, if, second, so, well, while, for example, kind of, as a result, as well as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66433566434 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32139395006 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541958041958 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8999079355 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1111111111 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202160558559 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611481208742 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536377942637 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135139623705 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581356630458 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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