People hold different views about whether noise should be restricted. While some of them believe that people have the freedom to produce sound, I would argue that the level of noise being created should be strictly controlled,
On the one hand, it is easy to understand why some people believe in their rights to generate noise freely. As people these days often have to suffer from considerable stress at work or school, they tend to find an effective way to relieve it. In some cases, recreational activities such as karaoke singing or party holding can bring a certain amount of relaxation. If too strictly imposed, any restriction of noise may prevent people from gaining access to one of the useful methods of relaxing.
However, I do understand the arguments against noisemakers. At first, excessive levels of noise can cause serious disturbance to the nearby residents who also have the rights to take a comfortable rest after a tiring day. Those affected by the loud sounds from their neighbors may not only be unable to relax but also have their levels of discomfort increased. If lasting for a long time, this will be bound to have a negative impact on their quality of life. Another reason for this opinion is that too much noise can lead to adverse effects on the health of the unintentional hearers. For example, being exposed continuously to high dB noise can result in hearing problems, for example, hearing loss. Hearing-impaired individuals are very likely to experience difficulty in their daily life.
In conclusion, although there are good reasons why people should be allowed to make as much noise as they wish, in my opinion, some appropriate controls are necessary.
- International travel makes people prejudiced rather than broad-minded. What are its causes and what measures can be taken to solve this problem? 89
- It is more important for a building to serve a purpose than to look beautiful Architects should not worry about producing building as a work of art 93
- The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is to provide free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university, in order to travel or to work. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 84
- Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98586572438 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72632187673 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614840989399 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0812357826 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249156366856 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844829112268 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940111417054 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194642139776 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100231915978 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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