some say that people working in different job roles should get different amount of holidays time. Do you agree or disagree. Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, it is believed by masses that people who are working in distinct department must get some number of holidays .Here, I would like to accord with the given statement.
Manifold points are there to support my point of view. First and foremost, people can make harmonious bindings with family members if they get some holidays. To illustrate, holidays help folks to share feelings, ideas, thoughts with near and dear ones and they can spent quality time such as watching TV, playing games, eating, outing with family members.Apart from it, in working sectors people do plethora of work which gives them burden, frustration, and these will effect their work. Therefor, providing holidays to working people is not only fruitful for people but also department.
Numerous points can be mentioned. Holiday make people free from hurries and worries and they do work more effectively. For example, in sphere time people can get new ideas and strategies for work and they do work more positively after spending time outside the working sector. So, holidays are lucrative for working sectors as well as people.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, everyone must give priority to work. However, still I believe that some holidays are necessary for working people.
- Nowadays children mostly spend time playing computer games rather than sports what are the reason for this it is a negative or positive development 69
- Nowadays many people become popular by being featured online or appearing on TV. is it a positive or negative trend in your society? Give reasons for your answer and include example from experience. 66
- Some people believe that physical fitness of strong individual or team is the reason for most sport achievements. Others think that mental attitude is more important. Discuss both the view points and give your own opinion. 78
- Some people believe that childrens leisure activities must be educational. otherwise they are complete waste of time. do you agree or disagree with the statement. give reason of your answer and include example from experience. 56
- Nowadays in many countries woman have full time jobs therefore it is logical to share household task evenly between man and woman To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, well, apart from, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27358490566 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58261501591 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646226415094 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 77.0681516581 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225436839547 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854214090004 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055988051919 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143668675924 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322668952461 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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