Choosing a lifestyle has become a popular trend. Majority of people in some countries are living independently. It gives a sense of freedom and employement opportunities, however, it has some detrimental effects which will be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.
There are two main reasons associated with this phenomenon. First and foremost, it cultivates a sense of freedom along with confidence. Living in boundations is no more a problem for them and can work in flexible shifts. For instance, in a conservative family, it is difficult to work in night shift whereas, living alone is a best way to choose working hours as per convenience. Hence, it provides the confidence to take the reins of life in own hands.
In addition, lack of employement opportunities make people to migrate for livelihood amd live on their own. Because they initially cannot bear the cost of living for whole family, they shift alone in a new city. For example, people in rural areas opt this option to migrate alone in order to earn and save money.
Why this is a negative development? This is majourly because sometimes individuals leave their home in the pressure of society as they have to show their abilities and often feel isolated. Although the technology helps us to connect with family members, they often miss the physical touch of their loved ones. As a result, people are unable to concentrate on their present life and fails to accomplish the purpose. Next, people who are living independently often indulge in misleading activities as no one is monitering them. It has been seen that 23% of individuals who are away from their families are addicted to drugs and alchohal which paved the way to severe criminal activities and increased them by 18%. Therefore, it is advisable not to live alone.
To conclude, although living on our own enhances earning capacities and gives the opportunity to live without restrictions, it is deteriorating the quality of life. People should be more careful of their surroundings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...in night shift whereas, living alone is a best way to choose working hours as per...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to work'.
Suggestion: to work
...s, living alone is a best way to choose working hours as per convenience. Hence, it pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05688622754 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94303458084 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565868263473 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4505178335 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.45 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335606470248 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921789445438 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630336634254 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167775459525 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266602228499 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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