Some students tend to play computer games rather than do sports. Why is this? What can be done to tackle the problem?
Nowadays, many pupils prefer to play online games instead of take part in real life sports due to multiple reasons. However, these issues can be address by encouraging the students to involve themselves in games while letting them know about the importance of sports.
To begin with, numerous scholars play video games either on cell phone or computer. As their both parents want to do job for earning and they have not enough time to spend with their children and therefore, they allow the teenagers to play online games and not go out and involve in real life games. Furthermore, the school going adolescents have much burden of their study like they have to complete their assignments and home work in given time. And, hence they play only video games for the relaxation of their mind only when they get time.
On the other hand, it is the primary responsibility of the family to motivate their blooming buds to go out from the house and take part in games such as football, cricket and volleyball so on.In this way, the individuals will excel themselves in society. Moreover, the teachers should have homework policy like on which day which teacher will allot assignments so that the budding flowers have time to come out from books and go in playgrounds. Apart from that, institutes should give a game period to all students in which they can play with their friends and show their interest in cricket, football and other games. Consequently, the all round development of students would possible.
In conclusion, the students should avoid to play computer games while knowing its negative impacts on health and only take take part in other games which are responsible for the maintenance of their health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90721649485 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48415818945 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0155843564 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.818181818 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3636363636 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156486257696 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675870099049 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461601115156 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10937876008 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355696451841 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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