With entrance to the digital era, a plethora of people have now vanquished the complexness of technological advances as well as the internet and now are able to fully utilize it. Thus, as an alternative to traditional education, some universities around the globe embraced online education for students. In my view, such opportunities give the possibility to study from every geographical location and a chance to study for a cheaper price for human beings.
The most colossal profit that students get from online education, is the chance to learn from every point of the world. In other words, one can be in somewhere South East Asia and study at the European Universities. To illustrate, my sister has enrolled in Harvard University, and has been studying there for at least 2 years while resiting in Central Asia, precisely Kazakhstan. Moreover, students are available to travel around the world without interrupting their studies at the university.
Furthermore, such education costs are more affordable than in presence studying including flights and accommodations. Usually, to study at the university, one is required to migrate to the country of origin and pay for flights and living which obligates to pay over $10.000 a year. However, with such the abovementioned novelty, it is no longer essential to have this kind of resource-intensive, moreover, it helps students to save up about 70 percent. As an example, Bayan, the oldest child of our family spends on her education roughly $3.000 on online education and invests the rest in her self-development.
In conclusion, distance learning through the internet has many fruits for prospective students, as it enables them to study from everywhere on the earth and spare a huge share.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, moreover, so, thus, well, while, at least, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19928825623 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14710690328 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608540925267 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1149815088 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.75 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172324566467 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578935468394 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325854207239 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965749680833 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462167671696 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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