It is true that, in this contemporary era, popularity of internet is being escalated day by day in human's life. Online courses are also being provided by few Universities these days for better understanding for people. According to my perspective, I reckon that this is a positive trend since it encompasses a wide range of benefits.
To start with, learning new skills in just some less money or free on internet such a biggest advantage for those who cannot afford high paid courses in some prestigious universities. Secondly, part-time as well as full-time work could be done easily by students. Furthermore, they could also be adjusted their timings flexibly. Thirdly, one of the most dominating reason is, it does not matter what is your age you can take any course easily if you want to do gain knowledge seriously. For example, in this covid pandemic era, it is not possible to go anywhere for learning something that is why students are taking their own classes on the internet. They are doing all things like, giving exams, taking their own classes etc. It saves time of children as well.
Looking at the other view, demerits could not be overlooked. Firstly, most of the students watch cartoons and play games while taking their classes on the internet. It could also destroy the future of small children. Secondly, it may be effect directly or indirectly on our health. Moreover, if we would sit in front of computer for a long time so light of screen would damage our eyes. Thirdly, lack of interpersonal communication, beacuse all the things would be done on smartphones or computer so it might be effect on personality development. For instance, my younger brother is taking his own Universities classes on the internet but most of the time he keeps playing with his friends rather than giving concentration on his own classes.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly there are lots of disadvantages available which can be effect on students yet, we must understand that, those people are getting chance to acquire some new skills through Universities who do not have much money or belong to poor families. Additionally, I personally want to say that it is a positive development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ome less money or free on internet such a biggest advantage for those who cannot ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, as well as, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94324324324 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86359099675 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578378378378 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7885548625 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2631578947 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4736842105 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184351682215 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484985625048 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367278042495 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112859092443 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277895579305 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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